Kaylee Lang
Megan Pugh
Kyle Buehrer
Ethnography: Student
Senate
Discourse
communities are a very important part of our society. It allows for people of similar scholarly
interests to pursue common goals and share their findings with each other. They
are a way for these scholars to communicate and get objectives completed. Out
of the many discourse communities available at Ohio University, Student Senate
is one of the most exciting and important.
Student senate is responsible for representing the student body of Ohio
University in political matters at the school.
As such, it seems to attract people who are interested in possibly
having a political career in the future.
When asked if he was interested in politics in an interview, Residence
Life Commissioner Nicholas Southall said, “I've always been interested in
politics. I chose to major in Education
for a reason though. I plan to teach
High School for a while, but if the opportunity to run for an elected position
in the future presents itself, I would not be opposed”. Student Senate
accomplishes many things throughout the year, and is constantly fighting for
student rights. Nick Southall said “Right now Student Senate is fighting to
have their voice heard in the guaranteed tuition debate”. This discourse community is unique in the
fact that it fights for the rights of all students of Ohio University, so it
works for the interests of another discourse community. This discourse community also has its own
internal competition, in the form of election campaigning. The members of student senate form different
parties that attempt to elect their members to different offices in Student
Senate. This discourse community is
truly a unique one, with lots of features that make it stand out from other
discourse communities. Even though they
fight for the student body, many people are not aware of what they do to help
Ohio University.
In
this ethnography, observations and studies on student senate are comparable to
the authors Swales, Gee, Porter, and Devitt et al. When comparing these
writings to the physical observations we made while studying this discourse
community many similarities are found. As previously mentioned, those who are
involved in student senate are extremely compassionate about the work they are
doing. Each meeting has important topics
as well as conversations that could be considered genres as described by Devitt
et al. Not only do the members of student senate communicate through meetings
but also through email, phone, and text messaging. These communications may not
be understood by those who are not in student senate and thus is strictly for
that community. Also, new members of student senate may not know how to
contribute correctly in this discourse community. They must observe and learn
from older members to fully grasp the community’s concept just as Gee
describes. Members of senate may be part of this Discourse and not even know it.
However, in Swales definition of discourse community is similar to Gee’s in the
fact that student senate is working together for the main purpose of
representing Ohio University’s students in a just way. These members get
together to work on problems as well as possibly prepare themselves for a
political future. Although, the members of student senate are working together
they also feed off of one another in meetings to produce something great. As
campaign season begins, leaders arise and just as Porter describes with his
example of Thomas Jefferson’s intertexuality, a good leader can be guilty of
this also. Many speeches and sayings are borrowed from the speeches of other
great leaders. Although discourse community has many definitions and descriptions,
these all come together and successfully define student senate and what this
community stands for.
The content of this post is very in depth. We believe that the Intro could use a more attention catching approach. The content can also be lost in the sources. We suggest doing something to separate then what is covered in your study, and what is mentioned in the sources. Something to note, Senate does not have political parties, instead they have "constructs" to base ideals on. This prevents alignment with governmental parties, and allows the students to focus on individual issues instead of alignment with party. So make sure to correct that senate does not use parties, but instead, constructs. We suggest not to focus on describing the Student Senate first and provide evidence of why it is a discourse community. That way, the audience can gather the understanding of what student senate is before you go into depth about the discourse community.
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